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9/8/2010 12:40 am

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United As People

In the early days, barbarisms were so constant;
People's slavery were so rampant.

Arenas were not only for bull's slaughtered,by matadors;
But for strong slaves fighting to dead,as gladiators.

Advanced nations conquered nations;
To add riches and admirations.

The world's people looks up to countries,of well to do;
Freedom and high quality living,have much to do.

But to conquer countries,not easily acquired;
Many resisted,due be ruled by aliens,not desired.

With powerful weaponry great countries often succeeded;
But freedom for countries defeated,later liberated.

Blood shed were unimaginably horrifying;
Long years passed,before glory, were clearly undenying.

Barbarism and poverty are decreased;
Due to countries new laws and decrees.

The United Nations Organizations,play good role;
To the world's peace and prosperity, as a whole.

All nations must be united,and all people should be included;
For happiness,wealth and health,and environment not polluted.

All race of black,brown,white,yellow or red;
As human beings in this earth,deserves proper respect.

jgsoriano

ltw222 75M

7793 posts
9/8/2010 4:43 am

A poem written-well, that's my believe
A lesson if learnt well reduces grieve

Lee

Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past

Eve1871 67F

9/8/2010 4:31 pm

ltw222

itw22

yes u r ntitled for ur opinion.

but r u sure u r just like an animal, who is just in here for sex,not for peace and friendships?

who is only thinking of urself not for others too?

jgsoriano

ltw222 75M

7793 posts
9/8/2010 10:45 pm

Eve1871

I was praising your poem; I think it is well written and that we can learn lessons from it. For sex, I go to other sites.

Lee

Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past

Eve1871 67F

9/9/2010 6:43 am

I am sorry for that,but the first rating was disagree.

jgsoriano

ltw222 75M

7793 posts
9/9/2010 7:42 pm