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A Walk In The Rain  Photo by Lee Siu Wei Walking in the shower Along the lakeside brick-layed lane In the early morning In the trees a mother Sheltering its young from the rain Using her tiny wings The smallish lake shimmers As the breeze blows by like a train With addicts still fishing People seeking shelter Jostling each other unrestrained Grim-faced and unsmiling The rain's almost over The sun will be shining again I will soon be leaving Lee Live today as if it is your last For tomorrow will soon be in the past |
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3/8/2009 4:56 am |
Nice one Lee. A beautiful poem, or is it a song as well?
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3/8/2009 9:08 am |
Sometimes walking in the rain can clear the mind...good write... floatingleaf...
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3/8/2009 12:27 pm |
Thank you, that was beautiful
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Hi potpourri, Thank you for the visit. Lee Live today as if it is your last For tomorrow will soon be in the past
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Hi Gunilupis, I am glad that you like it. Lee Live today as if it is your last For tomorrow will soon be in the past
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Nice one Lee. A beautiful poem, or is it a song as well? Thank you. A song? No I have never written one before.  Lee Live today as if it is your last For tomorrow will soon be in the past
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Hi Roxy, Thank you. Just writing what I see and feel. Lee Live today as if it is your last For tomorrow will soon be in the past
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Sometimes walking in the rain can clear the mind...good write... Thank you. It can also get you wet  but I like the rain especially in the early morning. Lee Live today as if it is your last For tomorrow will soon be in the past
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Thank you, that was beautiful Thank you and thanks for the visit. Lee Live today as if it is your last For tomorrow will soon be in the past
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