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ltw222 75M
5490 posts
7/21/2011 8:21 pm
Foto Friday - In the dark

Recently I tried a new form of poetry known as cinquain.
Well, you know what they say: one should never stop learning.

In the dark




Listen ……..
with little puffs
like a departing train,
the wind chases away the moon
tonight.

Softly ………
like wisps of mist
lingering in the hills
memories of you inundate
my mind
and touch me affectionately
like you did in those days
so long ago;
I weep.

Bygones!
Bygones should remain as bygones,
but the heavy silence
allows them in ………
till dawn.

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


gentleben 83M

7/21/2011 11:00 pm

A beautiful photo and beautiful poetry to accompany it, Lee. Thank you.



"Life isn't fair, but it beats whatever comes in second." -- Gentleben


Skipper_too 68G

7/22/2011 2:07 am

Very good Lee. Your photograph is quite evocative.


Hawkslayer 88M
13354 posts
7/22/2011 4:43 am

Enjoyed both picture and poetry. Thanks.

It only takes a drop of ink to make a million people think. There are many stories.


bijou624

7/22/2011 5:04 am

Hi Lee: Beautiful cinquain, very romantic.


Abelle2 83F
31246 posts
7/22/2011 7:27 am

I like it!! A lot!!!


spiritwoman45

7/22/2011 8:57 am

Both are very creative.

Spiritwoman ^i^


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
7/24/2011 1:46 am

A big thank you to all of you.

Lee

Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past