Blogs > jiminycricket1 > My Blog |
Ponderings....... Does the Robin sing As the crows squawk? Or does it try to repeat such talk? The crow with no civility As the song is complicated squawks to disturb tranquility when the tune is unduplicated Does the lily blush at the site of a rose? never smelling as sweet Nor vibrant red, it knows The rose and robin should pay it no mind for their song and perfume are shared with every kind Whether flying high or planted in ground it seems rather silly to become a crow or a lily I hope this isn't taken badly, it was meant for the rest of us and not to be construed as negative towards anyone. Yesterday, I wrote another, seems to fit ,to me....maybe we need to think more in terms of love than truth. Your truth must set you free Locked in the chamber of a gun A casing of righteousness A point of honor hard as blue steel With no other place to go Your truth can blow your mind just pull the trigger |
|||
5/23/2009 1:12 pm |
Jiminy Cricket, These are classics ...... "The cause of America is in a great measure the cause of all mankind."....T. Paine
| ||
5/24/2009 3:54 am |
Lovely poem Jiminy. I hope you are ok. Looking at 60min when he was young, wasnt he just a 'fine thing' to behold!!!! Thanks Jiminy.
| ||
|
Tranq. It was not written as a put down, just a thought. I do not pass judgement on you, as others may. Usually I write these things to remind myself, for I easy fall into that trap, These are my mistakes, written to self judge, not judge others. I am sorry I had to use you guys to make the point, but it my mind and OPINION it seemed to fit. (also made an easy rhyme) There is a place and purpose for us all, we are not just a rhyme. i hope you see that.
| ||
|
I give up surrender I must just be a prentender for I will not pay mind, justify the reason for poem has told me Why
|
×
×