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GavinLS2 69M
934 posts
4/14/2014 8:52 pm
Rough (VERY) Draft of Lyrics to My Current Song Project


Hi folks

Just felt like sharing this here. Not sure why. But these are the lyrics for the tune I'm currently writing. THESE MAY CHANGE A LOT BEFORE I FINISH!

Gazing Into The Sun
For A.T.-M.
Or: "The Canon Kiss"; --("The kiss by which to forever judge all others")

1
The first I saw Heaven,

I'd just turned eleven,

And she caught my eye.

2
End of recess.

A deep purple dress,

Standing in line.

3
Strength in beauty.

Beauty in strength.

I was standing beside.

4
Stunned to believe,

This thing I could see,

Her head held up high.

Chorus 1

The long road,

is a song note,

that I saved,

from gazing into the sun.


5
Chip on her shoulder,

She faced away,

Stoney cool eyes.

6
Knew I'd grow older,

And hope grows bolder,

To seek such a prize.

7
Refusing to see me.

Two seasons apart,

In self-respect pride.

8
But after the daybreak,

the light shone again.

Much brighter this time.

Bridge 1

In dreams of my father's ,

I knew then what I had to be,

What a young soul won't know,

A young boy can't see,

While I was gazing,

-Into the sun.

9
When she could see me,

with dignity eyes,

-My heart came alive.

10
Three more seasons,

As she said my name,

Still I was mesmerized.

11
Try not to be caring,

But something is therein,

A smile or a gaze.

12

I couldn't tell her,

Or know what to say,

Counting the days.

Chorus 2

The long road,

is a song note,

that I saved,

from gazing into the sun

(KEY CHANGE -Up 1 half step.)

13
Finally told her,

Short days I could hold her,

But knew all along.

14
Love in the pages,

To save for the ages,

And carry my song.

15
Never could happen.

Lost love is back then.

And years move along.

16
Alone with the dreams,

From a boy of fifteen.

Gazing into the sun.

Second Bridge

When you write your song,

Find the note that feels right.

It's the one that loves you.

It's kiss will hold the passion,

so you'll know.

-Gazing into the sun.

End (til fade)

When it kisses you, you'll know,

-Gazing into the sun.

When it kisses you, you'll know,

-Gazing into the sun.

When it kisses you, you'll know,

-Gazing into the sun.

When it kisses you, you'll know,

-Gazing into the sun.

When it kisses you, you'll know,

-Gazing into the sun.

Thanks for reading, and comments good or bad are welcome.

GBU all,

Gavin


GavinLS2 69M
1525 posts
4/15/2014 8:10 am

Thanks Angel and Cherub!

GBU,

Gavin


GavinLS2 69M
1525 posts
4/15/2014 8:13 am

Thank you Roxy!

Yes, I record them. It's just a hobby, but I have a studio in my home. Then I upload them online, and give them free downloads to anyone who likes them.

Just fulfilling a bucket list item from my ambitious youth. LOL

Thanks again and GBU,

Gavin


GavinLS2 69M
1525 posts
4/15/2014 8:14 am

    Quoting marathonman60:
    Is the lyrics set to "INA GADDA DAVIDA"?
    Tom C
Nope.

Thanks and GBU!

Gavin


frenchsalsa2 77F
7809 posts
4/15/2014 10:54 am

Gavin, definitely talented!!


GavinLS2 69M
1525 posts
4/15/2014 6:10 pm

Thanks Salsa and ET!

GBU both,

Gavin