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The Last page of the Tisha Story—Revisited! The Tisha Story Tisha could finally extract a response to one of her large numbers of e-mails sent to him. However, the response was short and to some extent appeared elusive to her! The tone of the message was sad and sounded to her like a swan song! She read it again and again until she started crying alone after putting off the light in her bedroom! After some time, she stopped sobbing and began reciting the message from memory aloud: I believe you could still remember some of the lines of Terry Jack's song that we used to listen to together. The Vast Ocean that separated us was no obstacle for us to enjoy the song every night! We had joy, we had fun We had seasons in the sun But the wine and the song Like the seasons have all gone All our lives we had fun We had seasons in the sun But the hills that we climb Were just seasons out of time It is now time for me to leave for the unknown. Do not ask me to turn back. Do not tell me you still love me. Let me bear the pain of separation alone while traveling toward the unknown! Just look back once please and ponder upon what I have left for you to hold on to dearly if you really want to hold it until you could measure the fathomless love of mine for you. I am neither an Army General from the USA nor a business tycoon from the Gulf State of Kuwait nor a product of the current century! I am what I am! Allow me please to repeat my favorite poet a bit differently once again here for the last time, Tisha! If you had mistakenly etched my name in the secluded shrine of your heart, erase it now! Do remember my friend to untie the thread with my name on your bright bangles! Erase the vermilion dot in my name that adorned your forehead encircled with scent Sandal The sweet delight of my bewitched heart must not mingle anymore with the fragrance of your being. My ardent life and death be plundered with your glory that is peerless! Tisha could recite no more. She broke into sobbing again. Next morning she heard the dreaded news on her cell phone from someone unknown to her as was promised to her by him!!!! The call originated from the city where he lived.      |
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They were meant to be. Supposed to be. But they lost it.
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DEATH COMES IN THE END, IT IS INEVITABLE BUT DOES NOT REMOVE THE FOND MEMORIES FROM OUR HEART AND MIND WHEN THE PAIN AND SADNESS OF SEPARATION HAS EASED.
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Look, Could it that because I had read your blog just from the list or was it because I hadn't posted any comment on it as yet, that it wasn't shown on the list of your visitors?. I really don't know But it's the 3rd time I came on it and now have posted these few words. It is a poignant story between you and your Tisha. I guess Tisha has well understood your above message to her. It is really pitious if it has ended this way. I believe that both of you will never forget each other even if that tie is totally broken by you as you have above stated it. My own opinion is, if your Tisha was really interested in the rich and high rank others, she wouldn't have accepted you as you are and as per your storical length of time, would she?. However it's just my opinion. Moreover, as you have mentioned how it is now between both of you, my simple advice is for both of you to consult your hearts, your exact feelings and to live according to the true sentiments of each of you towards the other. Thank you for this blog Look.
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8/4/2018 7:36 pm |
Lovely sad story Look.
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Life and love.
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DEATH COMES IN THE END, IT IS INEVITABLE BUT DOES NOT REMOVE THE FOND MEMORIES FROM OUR HEART AND MIND WHEN THE PAIN AND SADNESS OF SEPARATION HAS EASED.
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Look, Could it that because I had read your blog just from the list or was it because I hadn't posted any comment on it as yet, that it wasn't shown on the list of your visitors?. I really don't know But it's the 3rd time I came on it and now have posted these few words. It is a poignant story between you and your Tisha. I guess Tisha has well understood your above message to her. It is really pitious if it has ended this way. I believe that both of you will never forget each other even if that tie is totally broken by you as you have above stated it. My own opinion is, if your Tisha was really interested in the rich and high rank others, she wouldn't have accepted you as you are and as per your storical length of time, would she?. However it's just my opinion. Moreover, as you have mentioned how it is now between both of you, my simple advice is for both of you to consult your hearts, your exact feelings and to live according to the true sentiments of each of you towards the other. Thank you for this blog Look. Lisa, Tisha lives in my imagination. She will always live there until I leave for eternity! Thanks Lisa once again for visiting the blog and also for your meaningful post. Please remember, true love between a man and woman should not be shared with any one even if that one may happen to be his or her close friend!
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Lovely sad story Look.
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Life and love. Take care and be happy.
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Look this gave me the chills. I too am mourning the loss of my soul mate. God Bless.
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Look this gave me the chills. I too am mourning the loss of my soul mate. God Bless.
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Beautiful and heart rendering story looklook. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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Beautiful and heart rendering story looklook. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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Hello Poet_Dancer, Delighted to read from you here after such a long time! Hope, you are keeping well by His grace. Thank you so much for liking my blogs/stories. This particular story is the last page of the fiction that I have completed a month back. Perhaps you have read the first few chapters of this book posted on my blog pages long before and left your comments there too. Thanks again for stopping by. Stay well and happy always.
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Wonderfully written, Look or... Anam. Thanks.
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Wonderfully written, Look or... Anam. Thanks. Does not matter! Be happy!!
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