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majirret 78F
58 posts
5/15/2019 11:53 am

Exacrly!


WellKnownAuthor 61M
722 posts
5/15/2019 1:42 pm

IT'S QUITE CLEAR TANZ

OH WOE IS ME, DO I REALLY SEE
DUEL BEHAVIORS UNDER ATTACK ?

SO PRO AND CON, DEAD SPOT ON
ABOUT THE WAY BOTH SIDES ACT ?

LESSONS LOST, ALL OLD CUSTOMS TOSSED
BOTH PARTIES ALWAYS PASSING THE BLAME !

WITHOUT AN EXCUSE, TO REACH A TRUCE
SUCH A DAM UNNECESSARY CRYING SHAME !


I do it in poems because I love and welcome total and extreme challenge.
This poem was composed by myself with double rhyming words
in each of the Four first stanza's followed by alternate rhyming words every second and fourth lines.

Making the length of each line come out the same in total space of each is perhaps the biggest challenge.

Of course Capturing the blog message and covering it completely also falls within my own style...

Total time writing the poem and posting it in final form , about 25 minutes tops.
now back to my Judge Judy Show.


WellKnownAuthor 61M
722 posts
5/15/2019 2:13 pm

    Quoting WellKnownAuthor:
    IT'S QUITE CLEAR TANZ

    OH WOE IS ME, DO I REALLY SEE
    DUEL BEHAVIORS UNDER ATTACK ?

    SO PRO AND CON, DEAD SPOT ON
    ABOUT THE WAY BOTH SIDES ACT ?

    LESSONS LOST, ALL OLD CUSTOMS TOSSED
    BOTH PARTIES ALWAYS PASSING THE BLAME !

    WITHOUT AN EXCUSE, TO REACH A TRUCE
    SUCH A DAM UNNECESSARY CRYING SHAME !


    I do it in poems because I love and welcome total and extreme challenge.
    This poem was composed by myself with double rhyming words
    in each of the Four first stanza's followed by alternate rhyming words every second and fourth lines.

    Making the length of each line come out the same in total space of each is perhaps the biggest challenge.

    Of course Capturing the blog message and covering it completely also falls within my own style...

    Total time writing the poem and posting it in final form , about 25 minutes tops.
    now back to my Judge Judy Show.

Tanz I view your blogs content and subject matter as having great redeeming values as found in the ways of life.

What lacks most in the world today, is the absence of Brotherhood once found in the vast majority of most free world modern day societies.

This blog section represents a prime example of people unable to get along with each other at a time in our lives where retirement and advanced age should be enjoyed with the struggles well behind us.

Just scroll the blog postings headlines and it's clear that discord and unhappyness comprise the main number of postings.

Its good to see the ones that preach goodness and bring pleasure and enjoyment. That's what we want and need and truly deserve.

Many many years ago in taking Dale Carnegie's HOW TO WIN FRIENDS AND INFLUENCE PEOPLE,

It was pointed out at the very beginning and end of this Self Approvment course.

TO AVOID AND STAY AWAY FROM NEGATIVE PEOPLE.

Most of your blogs deal with this Subject and address it head on. This is good and helps greatly.
I support you by bringing my ideals and name to your posts as full endorsement.

Others also comment in support. Know that people new to writing all share the very same wonderment of how others view their works..

Self doubt is good as it motivates us to use more pride and time in making something out of a simply thought or idea.

in time you will gain a great deal of confidence and strengthen your abilities. This takes a little time to accomplish and your well on your way to expand and grow by leaps and bounds.

you have the eye to find great material and attach strong message meaning to it. Soon you will be writing your own views.

This is what i have been trying to do for you simply by saying the same thing in many other ways..

keep posting and growing, you have established a steady following that values and enjoys your creative mind..........this makes you special in here like some others in here in the same place and mode.


Rocketship 79F
18564 posts
5/15/2019 2:49 pm

Yuppers!!


TxJW18 81M

5/15/2019 6:08 pm

I also never understood Chaucer. LOL
Party On!


MrsJoe 76F
17381 posts
5/15/2019 6:54 pm

Well said.

Be a prism, spreading God's light and love, not a mirror reflecting the world's hatred.


Archer62 83F
7082 posts
5/16/2019 2:36 am

VERY TRUE BUT SOMETIMES A NASTY REACTION IS REQUIRED NO MATTER HOW MUCH CONTROL ONE TRIES TO APPLY.